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Tuesday, February 14, 2012

A Bird's Love !

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I can do what I like,
For me people are alike.
I do love their distinctness, their individuality,
But I have my own version of reality.

I can see you in high and low,
Often, staring right across the window
While I am here right on my tree,
Unnoticed, happy and carefree.

And then I fly,
Up there high, very high,
In the serene, blue sky.
Under the Sun shine, seldom I shiver
Across the clouds, over the river.
Above the mountain all blue and white,
Shining bright in the day light.

And then with night, I come back
With growing moon light, I come back.
 Perhaps, on the same tree.
Where again its me, only me.
And then, I rest.
In my nest,
Feeding my kids,
Hoping for the best.

With next lustrous ray,
They open their eyes.
I set my sight
On the tranquil, Orange Sky.
And then I fly,
Up there high, very high.

Nothing more, I will never need.
For, this is everything,
I ever Loved.

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I started Writing this poem almost 8 years ago. I am glad that found it safe on my hard-disk (Don't ask how it reached my hdd, because I dont remember that :)) !

18 comments:

  1. Hi Nitin, thanks for visiting my blog :-)
    Loved the following lines from your poetry
    On the tranquil, Orange Sky.
    And then I fly,
    Up there high, very high.
    Beautifully written...

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    1. Thanks Suchi... hope you like other posts as well.

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  2. Niceeee.....keep going....

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  3. These lines are so meaningful:
    "With next lustrous ray,
    They open their eyes.
    I set my sight
    On the tranquil, Orange Sky.
    And then I fly,
    Up there high, very high."

    Nicely written, thank you for sharing:)

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    1. thanks Saru. Your comments always means a lot.

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  4. "With next lustrous ray,
    They open their eyes.
    I set my sight
    On the tranquil, Orange Sky.
    And then I fly,
    Up there high, very high."

    I guess everyone has fallen in love of this para as I am. Very lovely.

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    1. I am happy Neeraj you liked the poem. Hope to see you more often here..

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  5. The best way to live a life.. Very well written, loved the free flight!

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    1. am glad you enjoyed the flight, without fastening the seat belts :) . keep sharing your thoughts here..

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  6. Very beautifully written..loved your space..glad to follow u!! :)
    Kande Pohe

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    1. thanks Poonam. Hope you enjoy other Poems too

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  7. Beautifully worded and spaced.
    Write more such kind.. :)

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    1. Always appreciate your comment Sahana. Do let me know what you think about other posts too.

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  8. very well expressed, the spirits of a free bird flying high.

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